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Emerald Skies Nuzlocke Page 61 by LizDoodlez Emerald Skies Nuzlocke Page 61 by LizDoodlez
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Defianent Featured By Owner May 24, 2016
How are Elon's family and friends going react when they find out this happened to her?
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Kyni-Nicole27 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Hobbyist
I've come here from some groups or links, I don't remember exactly. But I started to read this comic and I literally started to love it! I really like the story, you've got a lot of imagination (eg I love the fact that you added some "extras" that are related to the effective story of the game, such as Brendan's fight in the gym we were able to see). I only would say "Keep it up"! Although I don't have come to the last page yet, I hope you don't give up with the comic, as long as the Nuzlocke goes on. :)
Sorry for the long comment :)
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:iconlizdoodlez:
LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I'm glad you're enjoying it. :D
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:iconkyni-nicole27:
Kyni-Nicole27 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2016  Hobbyist
Besides, I love the way you've drawn Liam's evolution :D
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Tenshineko01 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
What was that explosion? What's with the Skarmory?
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angelneko88 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
phew... I was afraid someone may have died... but it looks like they're only hurt... I hope they will get better soon.

Liam and Pers give a nice couple in the second last panel :3
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Something-Borrowed Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Is the gray stuff ash that's all over Poseidon?
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:iconlizdoodlez:
LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It's Pallet's silk.
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:iconursegol:
Ursegol Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
just read the whole thing in one go, it's nearly 3 am here but it was worth
you improved sooo much and the story is great
since i read this to get ideas for your contest, i was pretty happy for the obvious shipping
BUT
you confused me a bit, because i don't know who likes whom now exactly, especially with elon, i mean is she interested in steven or in brandon or in both?? Confused Fox Icon  i have no clue 
and for the real but, and this is only my personal opinion
i think the shipping was a bit to fast, i mean they met and were instantly shipped, to me it seemed a bit forced
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LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Brendan is more interested in Elon than Elon is in him at the moment, hence why he tried so hard to charm her in his own dorky way. Elon does appreciate his help, but she just really sees him as a friend of her cousin's right now.
As for Steven, I've revised the script and his role in the comic quite a bit since his debut. He was originally supposed to be a love interest, but that has changed to not be the case. As for Elon being flustered on that particular page...Steven's hot so why wouldn't she be flustered? XD
Thank you for letting me know about your feelings on some of the ships, especially if they feel forced. I'll work on that for the future.
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Ursegol Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
thanks for clearing that up, it makes more sense now^^

no problem just thought i tell you and it's only a small thing and since the rest is good and your story has a great flow when you read it, it is only a small thing
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Fluffypuppy77 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh no........ oh..........0x0
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:iconlaprias:
Laprias Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
-Heavy breathing- 
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:iconkrisantyne:
Krisantyne Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Asdfsgkj Poseidon is still alive, he can make itttttttt
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starfireelf15 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No, Liam, stop it, stop crying, if the tough guy cries then I'M gonna cry and nope, nope, nope, nope, nope, I just can't can't do it GAH!
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Froodals Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HEEEE LIAM YOUR SO CUTE DAMMIT :iconchuuplz:

but also :(  hope they are all okay!!! :(
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:icon000aj:
000aj Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
Whoo! Character development :D
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:iconlizdoodlez:
LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Wooooo.
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:icontriodon:
Triodon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
... ... ...I feel bad for her...
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:iconlizdoodlez:
LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
For whom?
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Triodon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
elon...she is missing her pendent...and poisedon... ... ...I feel like I could cry ;3;
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:iconlizdoodlez:
LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Excellent.
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:icontriodon:
Triodon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YOUR MEAN! ;3;
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:iconvelink:
Velink Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist
yaaay they are okayy!!!
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:iconlizdoodlez:
LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Barely.
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:iconheartsinclaire:
Heartsinclaire Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*flails arms* Live I tell you, Live!! DX
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yellowy-yellow Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Liam looks great!

I hope everyone is okay ;3;
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LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks. :D
Things will wrap up in a few pages.
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yellowy-yellow Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't wait to see what happens!
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TheArmyArtist Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
STILL ALIVE!!!!
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:iconsearage76-theragecon:
searage76-TheRageCon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Elon is going to be partially deaf due to the explosion
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:iconlizdoodlez:
LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Most likely. At least in the burnt ear.
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:iconsearage76-theragecon:
searage76-TheRageCon Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student General Artist
Or both.  An explosion that close would rupture both of your ear drums
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:iconlizdoodlez:
LizDoodlez Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
True.
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Metrixchix Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
gumby if he dies i swear to god
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FallingUpStars Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awesomeness
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